hunnyahmed, you are a young person and you should be given all the positive enforcement one could muster. However, I shall offer you some constructive criticism:
- What is so special about this photo, other than the fact that you snapped it?
- It is hazy.
- Key elements of this composition are out of focus due to incorrect aperture setting which has also adversely affected depth of field.
If you are serious about photography, you should learn the basics. It will help you immensely in improving your skills and understanding the art as well as the science behind being a good photog.