Shair-O-Shairi (Poetry) Thread

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Beta hamain rehnay do dhoop may

agay aap khud samjhdaar ho

[wik_a]

A dedication to the lovely sistahs wik_a and TrueEye and c123pk.in.usa (hamare pyare ali bhai), from my school times written and presented by our seniors that time our school had a vaste area around the campus buildings with basketball, hockey, football and cricket areas. And it was really hot in summer, there were lots of trees. Seniors were used to sing this song in large groups.

Arz kia hai

aao bacho chaon main aao
kyun khare ho dhoop main
aana hai tu aao warna
jao m@# ki ch$%& main

That's fine but tell us that after singing that song what did they use to do with you poor juniors in chaon? :eek:

[s55]

That's fine but tell us that after singing that song what did they use to do with you poor juniors in chaon? :eek:

hum kabhi chaon main gaye hi nahin

[wik_a]

hum kabhi chaon main gaye hi nahin

yaani wo khud he dhoop me a ker ap juniors k sath @#((@&#(@ ker dete thay? :D:grin: tsk tsk tsk... poor juniors. :P:D

[s55]

No!

[TrueEye]

yaani wo khud he dhoop me a ker ap juniors k sath @#((@&#(@ ker dete thay? :D:grin: tsk tsk tsk... poor juniors. :P:D

hahahahah...LMAO! @ "ker dete thay?"...

s55 dude, you went to quite a school... was it somewhere in "lal-kurti" or something? it must be hard studying in such an environment...

[s55]

hahahahah...LMAO! @ "ker dete thay?"...

s55 dude, you went to quite a school... was it somewhere in "lal-kurti" or something? it must be hard studying in such an environment...

I was in Aga Khan School. I didn't get a word, what is lal-kurti?

[TrueEye]

ok forget about it then..

but tell me, how many times have you been offered a candy by those seniors of yours?

[wik_a]

^ lal kurti is in rawalpindi. I think you wanted to say "lalu khet".

ok forget about it then..

but tell me, how many times have you been offered a candy by those seniors of yours?

yaar s55 ne kia koe log book bna k rakhi hue thi? :o aj is nei yei kis, us ne wo kia...? :o

[TrueEye]

LoL! nah dude.. it indeed is lal-kurti that i'm talking about..

its a special neighbourhood that you would find in almost all the major cities of pakistan.. there used to be one in pesh, now you've confirmed that there's one in rwp too.. so i wont be surprised if there's also one in khi..

one dude used to go to lal-kurti maadal iskoool [sic] :-#:P:grin: where he used to take candies from seniors...aaaahahahaha

[s55]

Laholwallahquwat

[wik_a]

LoL! nah dude.. it indeed is lal-kurti that i'm talking about..

its a special neighbourhood that you would find in almost all the major cities of pakistan.. there used to be one in pesh, now you've confirmed that there's one in rwp too.. so i wont be surprised if there's also one in khi..

one dude used to go to lal-kurti maadal iskoool [sic] :-#:P:grin: where he used to take candies from seniors...aaaahahahaha

Laholwallahquwat

Zalim admi! Kyun yaad karwaya mere engineer bhai ko us ka maazi... ab kon chup kerwaya ga in ko... :'(:'(

hahahaha :D:D:D:grin:

[TrueEye]

i guess he doesn't like candies anymore..

[RetardedBuddy]

True eye you are from peshawar marra nowhere else in pakistan do they offer candies which school did you go to btw?

and this laal kurti you're talking about is translated to red light no?

[TrueEye]

nah dude, lal-kurti isn't what you're thinking.. its just a neighbourhood in any city (pakistani) inhabited by a certain community.. it roughly translates into 'ghetto' in english...

nowhere else in pakistan do they offer candies

you only wish dude (and if that makes you feel safer:grin:) btw have you ever been offered a candy in peshawar by any chance?

and as for the school that I went to, so it was govt. high school number 2

[RetardedBuddy]

nah dude, lal-kurti isn't what you're thinking.. its just a neighbourhood in any city (pakistani) inhabited by a certain community.. it roughly translates into 'ghetto' in english...

you only wish dude (and if that makes you feel safer:grin:) btw have you ever been offered a candy in peshawar by any chance?

and as for the school that I went to, so it was govt. high school number 2

I don't know what ghetto means but I was referring to a neighborhood inhabited by a "certain" type of people, otherwise known as the district of the lights which are colored red..

A friend (who happens to be from peshawar) was once offered candy I am thinking its the norm there
What about Australia have we received any candy offers?

[RetardedBuddy]

Btw a shair which was told by a great teacher of mine, he said that it was a full poem he wrote for someone special

If you know this, chances are i know you

Maara hai meray yaar ko kamzoor samajh kay
aay soorat e haram teri *** **

Aur ko hi diay ja raha hai
Day mujh ko bhi ek jaam teri *** **

[MominHaq]

TrueEye What about sugar free candies for the diabetics?

[s55]

Can I tell a famous joke on candies and pathan bhai? okay I can replace it with an unknown man what I do I don't make these jokes??

"An unknown" man asks a kid, beta toffee khaoge, bacha, nahin uncl bohat dard hota hai

[RetardedBuddy]

LOL this has turned into quite a thread