Good work, everyone loves to imrove Revo. Thats good, we are all getting involved in the Pakistani Car, thats great.
The top one should be sent to Adam Motors as consideration for a new 2007 face lift when Adam Motors will make the 100% Pakistani Revo in 2007, after the success of the current 2005 model, Insha-Allah.
Its a good attempt for a sedan conversion, but the back and angle should be lowered from the tail end a bit, as it is facing up too much from tail end. Toyota Camry is full size, may be a smaller car with straight or slight down facing back end should be incorporated into this sedan conversion.
Great job, really like the burgundy green color in 2nd picture.