Shair-O-Shairi (Poetry) Thread

[c123pk]

Maal deewano hoondo aa, Mastano hoondo aa,
Her Khushi khaan, her gham khaan Beygaano hoondo aa

[s55]

wah bhaee waah maza agaya

[c123pk]

Thanks dude, i wrote this sher a while back, while i was pondering upon something in sindhi language this sher of mine has depth in it, its a beauty in its own way, hope you enjoyed it, will write more as i start thinking again.

[s55]

So you aren't thinking right now? ^o)

[c123pk]

No, a little maybe now you say a sher, something with depth in it

[anilnaqvi]

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Heres Mine

^^^^^WADA^^^^^^

WOH BACHPAN KA WADA TUMHAIN YAAD HAI
WOH JAWANI K DIN WOH IRADA TUMHAIN YAAD HAI

WOH JAWANI K DIN WOH TAMANAO KA MACHALNA DIL MAIN
BURA NA MANO TU MUJH SAI KIA WADA TUMHAIN YAAD HAI

WOH BAAT BAAT PAI QASMEY KHANA EK DOSREY SAI
WOH HAR PAL ZINDAGI KA MACHAL JANA TUMHAIN YAAD HAI

WOH ANKHO ANKHOO MAIN BAAT KARNA EK DOSREY SAI
WOH HATHO KA LUMS SANSO KI HIDAT TUMHAIN YAAD HAI

WOH BECHANI SAI GUZARTEY WAQT MAIN INTEZAR KARNA
WOH WAQT PAI NA ANEY KA GILA KARNA TUMHAIN YAAD HAI

WOH BESAKHTA MAUT K NAAM SAI MEREY LABOO PAI HATH RAKHNA

WOH HATOO MAIN HATH DEY K KIYA WADA TUMHAIN YAAD HAI

WOH SHOKHI SAI BHAREY LEHJEY MAIN MUJH SAI IZHAR E MOHABBAT KARNA

WOH SADRI K MAUSAM MAIN RAATON KO DAIR GAYE BAAT TUMHAIN YAAD HAI

WOH RAAT BHAR BAAT KARTEY MAIN ANGRAI LAINA TUMHARA

WOH AGLEY DIN PHONE KAREYGEY KEHNA TUMHAIN YAAD HAI

WOH DURR NA JANA KEH K ANKHOO MAIN MOTI BHAR LAINA TUMHARA

WOH SEENEY SAI LIPAT K ROTEY CHALEY JANA TUMHAIN YAAD HAI

WOH MUJH SAI KEHNA DURR LAI JAO MUJHE ZAMANEY SAI
YEH LOG MUJHE DURR LAI JAYEGAI TUMHAIN YAAD HAI

WOH PAL BHAR MAIN RUTHNA US PAI MANANA MERA TUMHAIN

TUMHAIN YAAD HO K NA YAAD HO PAR ANIL MUJHE YAAD HAI

Anil Naqvi[/highlight]

[s55]

wah wah kia baat hai, kis dunya ki sair karwadi bhai

[anilnaqvi]

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SOME MORE

Mein andhero ka rahi ho tanhain ki adat hai mujhe anil
Fikar is baat ki hai mehfiloo ki adat hai usey

Merey hatoo ko tham k jinho nai chalna seekha
aaj jo main larkharaya tu koi pass na tha[/highlight]

[anilnaqvi]

s55
PAISEY TU NAHI LIYE NA SAIR KARANEY K LOL

[c123pk]

Very nice anil bro, you write your own stuff ??

[s55]

Nice poetry from the takhallus looks like you wrote it, is it?

[anilnaqvi]

[highlight]Yes i write them myself love to write well if u ask me writing poetry is sumthing which u feel inside hope u guys like this too

Some more

"Ansoo"

Ansoo yeh us ahsaas ka naam hai jo dil ki yaadon ko haqeeqat ka roop detey huey ankhoon sai bahar nikal aatey hai yeh un motiyoon ki manind hotey hai jin ki pakeezgi pai har koi rashk karta hai...

Yeh kabhi khushi sai chalak jatey hai lakin main un ansoo ka zikar kar raha hoon jo kisi ki yaadon main chalak jaye jab kabhi kisi guzrey lamhey ka khayal aaye ankhain jhalak jaati hai jab kisi ki mohabbat ka ahsaas shidat sai aaney lagta hai.....

Yaaadein ansoo ban jati hai jab kisi ki narmi sey ki gai baatain yaad aati hai khoon main rawani barhnai lagti hai jab kabhi dharkanoo ki raftar brabt honey lagti hai ansoo ban jatey hai jab yaadein dum ghotney lagti hai jab har taraf habs sa honey lagta hai jab shidat e dard dil main hook c jaga deta hai ansoo ban jatey hai...

Jab kisi ki mohabbat ka lams chehrey pai mahsoos hota hai jab kisi guzrey pal ki yaadein dasney lagti hai jab hatoo ki narmi yaad aati hai jab us ki zulfoo ka ghera tareek honey lagta hai jab suraj badloo main dhalney lagta hai jab raat khamoshi sai merey gird andhera phelaney lagti hai ansoo ban jatey hai....

jab shama -e-dil bujhney lagti hai jab ragoo sai bahta lahoo jamney lagta hai jab ankhoo ki doorey surkh honey lagti hai jab dua b asar honey lagti hai jab faryad ki gunj palat aati hai ansoo ban jatey hai jab kabhi wadoo ka tootna yaad aata hai jab kabhi barish ka mosaam kabhi jab kabhi woh jaroo ki sardi yaad aati hai jab us ki bahoo ka hisar yaad aata hai jab kabhi us ki ankhoo ki gahrai yaad aati hai jab is k hontoo ka lams bechain karta hai jab us ki sansoo ki hidat wajood ko pighlaney lagti hai jab 1 jaan 2 qalb ankhoo main utarta jata hai ansoo ban jatey hai....

Jab khud pai ikhtiyar mitney lagta hai jab saath chalna yaad aata hai jab jawani raqs karti mahsoos hoti thi jab zindagi ko gna yaad aata hai ansoo ban jatey hai ayr meri mohabbat main nahi janta yeh ankhoo ki nami kab khatam hogi bass faqat yeh dua hai ab meri k terey ankhoo ki nami bhi ab meri ankhoo sai bahey meri hansii terey hontoo pai jhilmilaye aur terey ghum meri palkoon main tarey ban jaye (Ameen)[/highlight]

[anilnaqvi]

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Another one just wrote it

Bheeg jati hai ankhain jab tera naam aata hai
barh jati hai khoon ki rawani jab tera naam aata hai

lakh chahoo main apney mazi sai nikalna anil
har guzarta din mujhe aur bhi us k kareeb lata hai

insaan chalta hai jaha sai wahi laut aata hai
yeh maqoola mohabbat walo ko kia khoob raas ata hai

hum nai wafa bhi ki sitam e wafa bhi dekh liya
aye merey maula mohabbat karney walo pai hi q zawal aata hai

woh jo kahtey hai k mohabbat ab rahi nahi is jahan main
un sai poocho kabhi insan mohabbat k bina bhi g pata hai?

Har ek kehta hai mohabbat hai waqt ka ziya aur us k siwa kuch bhi nahi
yeh hunar har ek k bus ka nahi mera maula jisey chahey wahi isey pata hai

Regards:
Aneel[/highlight]

[c123pk]

anil naqvi brotha, you are quite a romanchak guy (Y)

[ToofaneBatameezi]

Chaa gaye Anil saab!!
To kab chapp rahe hay aapke "Kitab" ?

[s55]

A beautiful song from Ek Vivaah Aisa bhi
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V36SZRdEiUQ

[highlight]Balaa Ka Husn Gazab Ka
Shabaab Neend Mein Hai

Hai Jism Jaise Gulistaan
Gulaab Neend Mein Hai

Use Zara Sa Bhi Padhlo
To Shaayari Aa Jaaye

Abhi Gazal Ki Mukkamal
Keetab Neend Mein Hai

Machal Rahi Hai
Mere Dil Mein
Deed Ki Hasrat

Woh Daale Chehre Pe
Neela Naqaab
Neend Mein Hai

Woh Inqalaab Uthaa Ta Hai
Leke Ang..Daai

Sawaal Jaaga Hua Hai
Jawaab Neend Mein Hai[/highlight]

[anilnaqvi]

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c123pk

Thanks brother

ToofaneBatameezi

thanks janab well in past i got an offer but i refused coz i do it for myself dont know why but wont like to publish it its just sumthing which is for myself and i wrote here just to share my feelings with u guys anyways i m glad tht u guys like it tc brother AH....[/highlight]

[feika]

Abhi Kuch Din Lagain Gai
Dil Aisay Shehr K Pamaal hojanay ka manzar bhoolnay mein, Abhi kuch din lagain gai
Jahan-e-Rang k sub khas-o-khashak, saray saro wa sanobar Bhoolnay mein, abhi kuch din lagain gay
Magar ab din he kitnay reh gai hain
Bus aik din dil ki loh-e-muntazir par
Achanak raat otray gi
meri be noor aankhon k khazanay mein chupai har khwab ki takmeel kar dai gi
Mujhe bhi khwab mein tabdeel kar dai gi
Aik aisa Khwab jis ka dekhna mumkin nahi tha
Aik aisa khwab jis k damun-e-sud chaak mein koi mubarak, roshan din nahi tha
Abhi kuch din lagain gai....

[ToofaneBatameezi]

@Anil -

Though I dont read books at all - But you should publish..spread the word!! (Y)

[waleed_khushi]

sadma hai to mujhe bhi hai ke tujhe se hu juda mai
lekin yeh sochta hu k ab tera kya hu mai
bikhra para hai tere hi ghar mai tera wajood
bekar mehfilo mai tujhe dhoondhta hu mai
kya jane kis ada se liya tu ne mera nam
duniya samjh rahi hai k tera sub kuch hu mai
lekin yeh sochta hu k ab tera kya hu mai